My Fun Holiday
On our way to Rotorua, we stopped over at Tauranga to take a break. We stayed at a motel called Fountain Court. I went with my auntie, cousin, popa, grandma, mum, dad and brother. After a good night sleep, we drove to Rotorua the next day.
When we finished riding the Luge, we checked into another motel. It looked like a first class motel with a mineral pool and a normal heated pool. We had lunch and jumped straight into the pool. When it got a bit cold we went into the mineral pool to cool off. After playing in the pool for a bit we dried off, watched T.V and ate fish’n’chips for dinner. We went to bed after dinner and had a great night sleep.
When we woke up, we had breakfast and got in the car and went to the Lady Knox Geyser. A man told us the history of the Geyser. There were lots of people there. After the Geyser, we went back home to get ready for Christmas.
On Christmas day I ran straight to the Santa sacks. I got some lego, clothes and a basketball hoop. It is really big. Then we got ready for the big family Christmas party. When we got there, we had lunch and we had a yummy ham. After lunch we opened our presents. I got some chocolate, games and toys from the Christmas party.
That was the best holiday I have ever had. It was so enjoyable that I would like a time machine to take me back in time so that I can experience the love and joyous time again.
Learning intention: We are learning to use the structure of a recount correctly.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write my orientation, followed by the body and then the conclusion.